Copy Examples

Homepage headline examples for lawyers

The headline is read in about a second, usually by someone who arrived from a search. It should confirm they are in the right place.

Ten of them follow, written for lawyers rather than filled in from a template. Your customer is someone with a problem they have been avoiding naming, and what they are weighing up before they get in touch is a bill that arrives with no warning and no way to have predicted it.


Service plus place

Contracts and review in [your town]

Use this as the safe default. It says what and where, which is what people searched for.

The outcome

[The problem], sorted — usually within the week

Use this when the result is more compelling than the service name.

Answers the worry

We quote flat fees wherever the work allows

Use this when the whole market has a trust problem.

Speaks to the customer

For someone with a problem they have been avoiding naming

Use this where naming who it is for filters better than naming what it is.

Credential-led

Lawyers in [your town] — admitted to practise in this state

Use this where the licence is the first thing people look for.

The question they typed

Need a lawyer in [your town]?

Use this to mirror the search that brought them here.

The standard

Explaining it in language the client can repeat to their spouse

Use this if your differentiator is strong enough to lead with.

Plain and unglamorous

Lawyers who turn up and charge what they quoted

Use this when your market distrusts polish.

Specialist

Just contracts and review. Nothing else.

Use this if you have narrowed and want the right people only.

With the next step in it

Book a consultation — a paid or free initial consultation, stated clearly which

Use this where the headline sits right on top of the button.

Writing for lawyers: what actually matters

What should a lawyer’s website say that a generic one does not?

Three things, in this order. That you are admitted to practise in this state. That you understand the thing people are actually worried about, which for lawyers is a bill that arrives with no warning and no way to have predicted it. And what happens next: a paid or free initial consultation, stated clearly which. Everything else on the page is decoration by comparison.

What does someone with a problem they have been avoiding naming check first?

The credential, then the proof. For lawyers it sounds like this. We quote flat fees wherever the work allows. You speak to the lawyer, not an assistant. We estimate before the work starts. Put at least one of those above the fold rather than on a separate page nobody opens.

What is the most common mistake on a lawyer’s website?

Writing about the business instead of the customer. "We have been established since 1998" answers a question nobody asked. "We start with a paid or free initial consultation, stated clearly which" answers the one they are actually holding. If you only fix one thing, fix that.

How long should the copy be?

Shorter than you think, except where trust is being built. An About page of 120 well-chosen words beats 500 vague ones. The exception is anything explaining a bill that arrives with no warning and no way to have predicted it — there, specifics earn their length.