Website copy examples for personal trainers
Nine pages, ten examples each. All of it written from the same short record: your customer is someone who has restarted three times and wants it to stick, the credential they check is certified personal trainer, and what they are quietly worried about is being shouted at, being the least fit person in the room, and being sold supplements.
- About us An About page has to answer one question fast: why you rather than the other three quotes. These are ten different answers to it. Ten →
- Bio A bio is read by someone deciding whether to trust a person, not a company. Length and person matter more than polish. Ten →
- Tagline A tagline earns its place by saying the one thing you want remembered. Ten angles here, not ten rewordings of one. Ten →
- Services page A services section has two jobs: help the right person recognise their problem, and stop the wrong enquiry before it reaches you. Ten →
- Homepage headline The headline is read in about a second, usually by someone who arrived from a search. It should confirm they are in the right place. Ten →
- Call to action Most calls to action fail because they ask for more commitment than the visitor is ready to give. These vary the ask, not just the verb. Ten →
- Elevator pitch An elevator pitch fails when it describes the business instead of giving the listener a reason to ask a second question. These end somewhere the other person can pick up. Ten →
- About me An About me page is read by someone judging a person rather than a company, which is why it is first person even when the business is not. Ten →
- FAQ page An FAQ page is where the objections go that the rest of the site is too polished to name. Answer the money question first or the visitor leaves to find it. Ten →
Writing for personal trainers
What should a personal trainer’s website say that a generic one does not?
Three things, in this order. That you are certified and insured. That you understand the thing people are actually worried about, which for personal trainers is being shouted at, being the least fit person in the room, and being sold supplements. And what happens next: a first session that is an assessment, not a beasting. Everything else on the page is decoration by comparison.
What does someone who has restarted three times and wants it to stick check first?
The credential, then the proof. For personal trainers it sounds like this. I train people who started exactly where you are. I build programmes you can keep doing without me. I do not sell supplements. Put at least one of those above the fold rather than on a separate page nobody opens.
What is the most common mistake on a personal trainer’s website?
Writing about the business instead of the customer. "We have been established since 1998" answers a question nobody asked. "I start with a first session that is an assessment, not a beasting" answers the one they are actually holding. If you only fix one thing, fix that.
How long should the copy be?
Shorter than you think, except where trust is being built. An About page of 120 well-chosen words beats 500 vague ones. The exception is anything explaining being shouted at, being the least fit person in the room, and being sold supplements — there, specifics earn their length.